Thursday, July 17, 2008

Luve's & Crys's hardwork

2day we were asked 2 pair up n write a poem abt love by our eng t'her MISS EDITH not SUSEELA!

our poem -

love is like drug
addictive and expensive
it can be hurtful but beautiful
it might turn you into a fool
many are out there
choosing is what to do
once is it taken
you can't turn back time

line 1-4 = luve
line 5-8 = crys

sudd luve tel me some of her parts r modified from 'love is'. i din reli noe wat dey wrote til i read their post which is now. so we decided 2 change d parts which r similar 2 'love is'. n tis is d result.





















yes, we came up with nothing. NOTHING! i wrote lotsa sentences but i juz doesn't fits as a poem. well, at least we did wrote a poem. my idea was better den luve's altho is doesnt reli fit d whole poem. ^_^

*Crystal* ~ *socialiser*

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